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Ceasar vs Winter
Once there lived 2 apes Ceasar and Winter, Ceasar was a stubborn ape and winter was a strong white gorilla.
Cesar and Winter sat at a campsite up mount egmont, “are we doing this? go !’’ yelled Ceasar.
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Winter and Ceasar set of up mount then winter asked “why are we doing this?” “where are we going ?” “be quiet’’ yelled ceasar and moments later… “are we there yet?” “where are we” asked winter “that's it !” yelled ceasar “go run now” yelled ceasar “ no,no,no don’t shoot me, i’ll do anything”. “Wait you’ll do anything” “ ok youre my slave offered ceasar, “ok ... i’ll be your slave,” grinned Winter, “ good now go get me some food” “when” asked winter “NOW”! Yelled ceasar.
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