LG use different types of sentences
S.O.S -use punctuation
-make my sentence different length
Once upon a time there were 2 friends pig and cow . They loved food especially meat.Pig well he was a pig and cow well he was funny.they lived on a farm where they like to explore.
One day they explored and …. Found a truck with lots and lots of cattle. The oor opened on the truck pig and cow went in. “I don’t know this pig” whimpered cow. ”I’m sur they are m-o-v-i-n-g” pig paused something caught his eye.”what is it pig” questioned cow? Pig saw a death trapping machine that would kill them. “Why do they do this” pig spoke. “I don’t know” added cow. When it was their turn made a run for it. “Ahhh” screamed pig and cow.
“Ooh oh,” breathed pig trying to catch his breath. “Oh we could have been dead meat’ screamed cow “that's it,” talked pig “we are meat
,” suggested cow confused ,”yes they were killing us trying to get our meat” yelled pig in cows face “ so we’re eating ourselves the time,”asked cow “yes” pig replied. So pig and cow realized that they we’re eating themselves because they were meat. They promised each other NEVER TO EAT MEAT AGAIN.
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