Wednesday, August 2, 2017

L.G:Use precise verbs
S.O.S:Wow words
JEFF THE CAT!!
Jeff the cat!
Sat on his fat bed!
And was eating a fat rat!
Along came pat the bat with a cricket bat!
And hit Jeff in the head with the cricket bat!
Jeff got knocked out seeing rats!

8 comments:

  1. met your LG
    punctuation
    got some picture

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  2. p l.g
    p punctuation
    ns roll off the tongue

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  3. *good rhymes
    *l.G
    >commas

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  4. L.G achieved
    good rhyming
    N.S commas

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  5. L.G achieved
    good rhyming
    N.S commas

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  6. positive lg met
    ns ryming

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  7. postive spelling
    ns rhyming

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  8. Good job
    positive, goal achieved
    Positive, Rhymed
    N.S Make it roll off tongue

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