Tuesday, August 1, 2017

Nursery rhyme
L.G punctuation          
Hundreds of kids
playing on bars.

One fell off
And saw stars.
Children ran off to tell.


He will be back to ring the school bell


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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 1, 2017 at 3:51 PM

    the use of pictures
    met L.G
    Title could be more about the story

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  2. AnonymousAugust 2, 2017 at 2:50 PM

    pictures
    rhyme
    more detail

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  3. AnonymousAugust 7, 2017 at 3:50 PM

    good pictures
    met L.g
    make sure it makes sence

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  4. AnonymousAugust 9, 2017 at 2:24 PM

    positive ryming
    next step direct speech

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