L.G: Use Precise verbs

S.O.S:- Said is dead- adverbs- adjectives

-Wow words- 5x direct speech

Super World!!

Once upon a time a planet far far away lived the massive hero Hulk Smash, 1 dumb Clumsy the smurf & 2 dumb boys named Jeff & Bob. One day they were all at Hulk Smash market in super world getting lunch!!

One day Jeff & Bob meet up. “Hi Jeff,” mumbled Bob, “Hi Bob,” answered Jeff. Then they went to this rocket ship place in Adelaide. Then Jeff thought it would be cool to hop inside one of the rocketships. ( not realising it was the one to go to super world!) But then Bob followed Jeff into the rocket… ppp wwwww the rocket accidentally went high up in the sky.”AAhhh!”screamed Bob & Jeff! “What are we going to do Bob,” Yelled Jeff terrified!

But then Bob & Jeff got out of the rocket and don’t have a clue where they we’re.”We’re losttttt,”Yelled Bob!  But they looked around and then… they saw hulk smash market!!!!!They ran over there because they thought there might be help in there but instead they saw the huge hero... Hulk Smash. They ran over to him and asked, “ Can you help us back home Hulk smash.”

“Yes definitely,” answered Hulk Smash.

So Hulk Smash got dumb clumsy the smurf to kick up the bum. Then Hulk Smash and Jeff & Bob went flying right back to earth.”Thank-you Hulk,” Yelled Bob & Jeff politely, as the hit the ground on earth. “Anything boys” replied Hulk smash happily!!