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A day as a chef

On the 11th of september the year 5 and 6 students of room 6 are now preparing their beautiful entree for their 20 customers. The entrees are now prepared and ready to be served,and they look amazing and mainly involve bread.out of all the menus i’d go to the irish leprechauns restaurant because it sounds awesome.their entree soda bread, main irish stew and dessert macarons were all cooked to perfection.when i asked the customers how it was they said it was amazing but the setting was disgusting they wanted real table blankets not paper. They thought they could do better but they go t $10 or over and 20 comments. The service  was horrible because they dropped the food and ran around.overall it was good.

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On Monday the 11th of september 2017,

The year five and six students from sps did masterchef at their school. There were three classes, each class had four groups of students. I went to the Italian meatballers restaurant from room six.

I walked up the ramp and into the school hall on monday morning. They asked me for my ticket so I showed them my ticket, then they showed me to the table. I chatted with some of the lovely people sitting next to me before we got our entree, which was garlic bread filled with yummy melted cheese in the middle. Then they asked me “what drink would you like coke, lemonade or raspberry,” said the lovely waitress with manners “ Raspberry please.” Next came the main, spaghetti and meatball it looked spectacular it was a bit boring though and it said topped with parmesan cheese but i’m certainly sure that i just got normal edam cheese. Then I had a peek through to have a look in the kitchen, everyone was working really hard preparing food, plating food, they were working hard. Then I got really excited  cause it was dessert time. When I had a look at the dessert  I almost fainted it looked so delicious and it was!! I t was definitely the best dish for me, Because it was neopolitan ice-cream drizzled with chocolate sauce and a flake sprinkled on top!!

So it was pretty good restaurant the service was friendly, fast and great service. The main was okay, and the dessert was delicious and the entree was to.

Masterchef SPS 2017

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                           Masterchef SPS 2017
11th September 2017 is an exciting day.Year 5/6 students in ruma ono,at Stratford Primary school have 4 group,each group have to cook for 20 people.Today is room 6 student's Masterchef day.The setting is SPS school hall.
Now the students are using their decorations to dress the school hall and their table.Look!Italian Meatballers are going to put their decoration flags on the table and the wall.They also throw the lollies on the table for the customers.They put the menu,knife and fork in front of everyone's seat.This is very cool.
The customers are all coming into our restaurant.Let's see what's our FOOD!Italian Meatballers 's entree is delicious sliced garlic bread with cheese.Main is soft spaghetti and meatballs with sauce and cheese.Dessert is ice cream with smooth chocolate whizz and flank.And the waiters will give you some soft drink when you come.Looks so delicious!
Customers gone.It's time to tidy up!Lots of girls are in the kitchen and clean the dishes.I am clean up the table and the hall with my friends.First take the things off and take off all the paper.Then,put the chairs and tables back to their "home".Finally,sweep the floor.
And what about the kitchen?I saw girls are washing many dishes!
If you put all the dishes together,they will looks like a mountain!
11th September 2017 is a busy day!

On Monday the 11th of  September year  5 and 6 students from Stratford Primary School Cooked up Heat On the Grill. The French Flamingos had an amazing table setting with   gorgeous pink flamingos that lit up. The Entree was amazingly delicious with sweet onion and spicy flavours. The Main was even better. Crispy bacon with Golden roast potatoes.But The dessert was a little bit of a  let down. The chocolate mousse was not set and It was too sweet. But it was overall scrumptious. I popped my head in the kitchen… It was hektik! There were about 20 people in the kitchen at once! Next time the presentation could have been better. Just those little spills on the side. The waiters were very polite. Maybe next time have more drink options because their was only coke and water. The clean up looked like a big job. Three sinks filled to the top with dishes. The French Flamingos had to start a 9.00 but had delays as to why the chocolate mousse did not set. The relaxing music was just perfect! All in all it was a great experience.

Mexican Amigos

Cook up a mess!

On the 11-9-17 Masterchef took over the Stratford Primary school hall.Four groups called Mexican Amigos,French Flamingos,Irish Leprechauns and Italian Meatballers had to create a three course menu.I was undercover in the Mexican amigos restaurant because i love a nice spicy meal.When i arrived i showed them my ticket and they showed me my seat and asked if i would like a cup of water.I look at the menu the entree is guacamole with corn chips,Main is Chimichanga and the diserret is Churros.The service was very slow but after about twenty minutes they start serving the entree it was guac and corn chips but to be honest it looked like someone vomited on the plate and popped some chips on.Next on the list is probably my favorite the was...CHIMICHANGA Beef mince cooked amazingly with seasoning and jalapenos wrapped in a nice tortilla with sour cream.Then what would normally be the most yummiest,tastiest and with amazing plating was the churros which didn't have any of those it was just a big blob of cooked dough with dark chocolate sauce on top.It tasted alright i guss.so over all i think the Mexican Amigos restaurant was a nice 6out of 10

Masterchef

On monday 11th september 2017, the year 5/6 students at stratford primary school had the experience of cooking up a restaurant with real food from supermarkets and decorations made from paper.

When I look through the kitchen door I see chaos dishes and excitement. People were running around finding plates to dish up.

The wonderful French Flamingos put together some amazing dishes. Like a creamy onion soup filled with beef stock. And a potato bacon and cheese all melted together for a beautiful taste. Everyone loved the chocolate moose that had whipped cream made by real chefs.

Overall, I think this was a great experience filled with laughter and enjoyment.

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          How did it taste

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A cooking Experience for sps

September 11th 2017

Year ⅚ students at stratford primary school had been cooking for 20 people per four groups for a new restaurant experience.They had challenges along the way that they had to get around.On the early Monday morning,the four groups went down to the hall to set up the tables,prepare the kitchen and set up their food.They had to come up with a name,do their budget and make tickets but that was only the start.I went undercover at the Italian meatballers.I walked up to the restaurant and they asked ‘’can i see your ticket please.’’They walked me into their restaurant and sat me down where I'm supposed to sit.Their table was decorated with little mini flags,a middle table piece and lollies spread all over the table.They gave me a bit of time to get myself comfy and then they came up to me and asked ‘’Do you want coke,lemonade or raspberry today.I picked one of the drinks and they poured it into my cup.There menu was for Entree:Garlic bread with cheese in the middle Main:spaghetti and meatballs Dessert: Neapolitan ice cream with chocolate sauce and flake sprinkled on top Drink:spider of your choice.They brought their Entree out to me it tasted so good.I have to admit their service was pretty slow.NExt they cam up and offered to take my plate.A few minutes later they brought out my main it looked pretty nice but it wasn't we only got 2 meatballs and our spaghetti was hard and cold.Dessert was next I'll have to say that was the best out of all the dishes.Half of their dishes was pretty healthy.I had a look in the kitchen and most people were helping.But overall meatballers did a good job.

September llth 2017

Sps cooks up a feeding frenzy

On monday 11th september year 5 and 6 students cooked up a delicious restaurant experience! The day as filled with table setters,preparing food and  every cook’s worst nightmare:dishes. The atmosphere was absolutely electric buzzing with students. Waiters setting tables here and there and chefs were busy preparing a 3 course meal entree,main and dessert. One of the groups was irish leprechauns. Their menu was Entree: soda bread. Main:irish stew with side dish colcannon and dessert irish style macarons. The irish leprechauns customers thought everything was cooked to immaculate perfection except the customers may have wanted more than one macaron. I took one look in the kitchen and i could barely step in there! everyone was rushing about here and there. I wished i could've  tried the food  it looked amazing. All of the waiters were so polite to their customers just like in a real restaurant. And the clean up everyone had to do dishes  ( i could have sworn there were over 1000!) the tables had to be cleared,spills had to be cleaned. It took ages. But they did it anyway what a day!!        

     

S.P.S cooking up a some meals

On monday the 11th of september 2017 the stratford primary school hall was filled with this amazing aroma.Room 6’s year ⅚ students used different sense of style and unique patterns to wow the customers.They used a,mazing food to fill our stomachs and decorations to  cover the tables.The restaurant I went to was Italian themed so they called their restaurant name the Italian Meatballers but I was not a big fan of that name.There presentation was outstanding for their entree.They had garlic bread drizzled with Edam cheese.For the main they had meatballs smothered in leggos pasta sauce with spaghetti under the meatballs.For dessert they gave us neapolitan ice cream with chocolate sauce sprinkled with flake crumbs.The table was set ot like the queen was here. There was an ornament in the middle of the table and lollies spread around the table.The waiters came around serving drinks Coke, Raspberry, lemonade and they asked me “what drink would you like madame”?” I’ll have the raspberry”I replied.Then the kind waiter poured the raspberry in my cup.In a few minutes the entree was served and my moth could feel the garlic bread in my mouth before it reached my plate.I could smell the garlic .I picked up my fork and put the garlic bread in my mouth.It was so delicious.When the main came out my mouth was watering.just One bite I thought.The waiter asked me if I enjoyed all my meals.And I said yes.

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Meet the all blacks

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There i am standing with jordan at the meet the all blacks at yarrow stadium.

I see kieran read and go get his autograph , then i see the rest of the squad lining up so i run for their autographs.

After i get signatures i go to the drills and techniques bay and do some kicks. After the kicks i walk out with a free all blacks  rugby ball, that looks awesome i tell myself this is the  best day ever.

Jenna Armitstead

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                                  Jenna Armitstead
Jenna is one of my best friend.She 've got two brown eyes which is throw the sunshine.Her dark brown hair always shining bright which is so pretty.Her lips always thin and dry.The skin of her face is so white.Her eyebrow is very tidy and beautiful.
She loves to wear a pink cloth with a hat,and black trousers.Her shoes are wood brown.She loves to DIY some interesting things.She loves to play with Alice and me.
Jenna loves smile.When she is smiling,the voice just like a small river.Jenna is so funny.Her favourite color is blue.She is very good at netball.She likes to play it.She likes her farm,she also likes the animals in the farm.

5.9.17

Why year ⅚ should be in charge of the pe shed

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Mr Moore year ⅚ should be in charge of the pe shed here are three reasons why.

Firstly, the year ⅞ students are disrespectful to the juniors and the year ⅚. Because when you return 1 thing but still have another thing out they tell you to return both. Also they throw things at their customers.

Secondly, we would be better role models to the junior syndicate. Like not throwing things at people, cleaning up after we finish and greeting people as they come up.

Thirdly, year ⅚ are not disrespectful to all the juniors we are really nice, kind and caring. Apart for the seniors they don’t even talk to them all they say is “what's your name, what room and what you want to issue.”

Finally, I hope you have changed your mind about the year ⅚ doing the pe shed.

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Nz Rugby Union why are men getting paid more in rugby than women in NZ? Well I don’t know, but also I don’t reckon men should get paid more money I rugby. Women and Men should get paid the same.

Firstly, They do the same job. Both of the NZ rugby teams boys and girls play rugby. So they should be getting the same amount of money.

Secondly, the boys a worth the same amount as the girls. It’s not like the boys a way better than the girls. I mean the boys get about $1 million a year each, and the girls only get $30,000 thousand a year each.

Lastly, Girls are really good and amazing at rugby . Seriously the Black ferns won the world cup this year. It was Black ferns onto the England team, the score was 41-32 to the Black ferns. So that is pretty good because england is a very strong good team.🏉🏉

So NZ Rugby, have I convinced you that the Women NZ Rugby team should get paid the same as the men NZ rugby team.

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Boom! Crash! Bang! Wouldn't you just want all this drama  to stop.All these nuclear tests just to

Bomb America.That's Right people I Ella makara will be Telling North Korea and Kim Jong-un to stop trialing  missiles to reach america.

Firstly,There is no reason to bomb America.What has Mr Trump Enver done to you?You are going to hurt people and injure them really bad that they suffer a horrible,miserable death.

Secondly,all this drama and riot could send all of us into world war three (WW3).I am not a scientist but I've heard WW is not a great place to be. It is like being in a smokey jail.

Lastly,damage.Mr Kim Jong un,you and your fantasy friends need to get your act together and realize how much damage and people you are hurting.This world is to live in not to wreck.we need to look after our planet.

I have told you there is no reason to bomb America,it might start World War Three And think about all the damage you may cause.I Want you to think about this because you are not only hurting me you are hurting the world.

How To Make Pancakes

What you need

-1 cup of flour

-¾ of milk

-1 egg

-¼ of sugar

-pinch of salt

-bowl

-spoon

-butter

-pan

Step 1. Put your flour ,egg,milk,sugar,salt into  a bowl.

Step 2.Stir your pancake mix with your spoon.

Step 3.Put your pan on a medium heat.

Step 4. Put a little bit of butter into your  pan.

Step 5.Pour   ¼  of your mix  into your pan.

Step 6. Wait  two  minutes.

Step 7. Flip your Pancake .

Step 8. Whip some cream (Opicanal)

Step 9.  Top with  your favourite berries and fruits

Enjoy your pancake!

Mace Windu

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His Brown skin is as brown as the solid ground. His  eyes are the colour of dirt which helps the grass grow .His head is as bald as a chicken without feathers.

His lightsaber is as purple as a purple minion.

His robes are as brown as his head. His cape is as long as the Great Wall of China.

Master Windu likes to use his lightsaber and meditate which he does with ease.