Made of more

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We are very different including this cloud.This cloud takes on human like features .For example ,when this cloud went into the city to put this fire out with his rain.This cloud has a mind like us humans.The cloud would go places and the more places he went the more he became.The things I liked about this inspiring cloud was when he put the fire out.the thing I did not so much like when he tried to scare the dog with his lightning.This cloud is made of more than you think.Age appropriate for all ages.I rate this a 5 out of 5 because it was so characteristic.

                 Made of more

Have you ever started thinking about that one special cloud.One fine day in a city up high in the sky,this one cloud took on personifaction.As the day went by,he went and put out a fire,he gave shade when needed and much more.This was a cloud that had a mind of his own.He wasn't just a cloud,in people's eyes,he was much more.As the sun went down,he went back to the ordinary clouds but tomorrow will be a brand new day.1 of the pluses were that wasn't an ordinary film,it was film you wouldn't expect.The second positive was that it teaches you to be yourself,you don't have to be perfect to fit in.What I didn't like about it was when the cloud tried to scare the dog it didn't really fit into the storyline.The second one was it didn't tell you to much of a story.The age rating is probably a 10-12 year old.I give it a rating 5 out of 5 it wasn't something basic it was something made of more.

Made of more

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Made of more, what’s a cloud made of ? answer? Water vapour but this cloud  was made of more than  water vapour.it had personification So personification is something that isn't human that has Similar human attributes. e.g In this case there was a fire and the cloud put it out with Its Rain. The Wind couldn't control him.

Two positives, 1 It describes a word i’ve never heard before and it had a good ending.

Two negatives, 1 not enough detail and not a lot of talking.

I think this film can only be watched by 10-30 year olds. I rate it a 4\5

made of more

Made of More

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The cloud came from sea to land

The more he seen the more he done

The world could not stop him.

In this movie report a cloud came from sea he was different from the rest. This cloud was made of more he rushed to fires and he gave his power to put them out. And he made light with his lightning strikes.

The positives on this movie report were most of it made sense it was a great film action movie and I really enjoyed it.

The negatives were it needed more sentences throughout the movie because there were only 7 sentences describing what had happened.  

This cloud was definitely made of more.

I give this movie a 4 out of 5

Made of more

Crash burn have you dreamed of being a superhero or a free roaming person like made of more but he is a cloud.

The quick slick sneaky cloud paw patrols around the town of dairy.he puts out fires and much more

The cloud did not care about what others thought  he had a mind of his owne.

He was scaring pets for no reason nughty nughty.

This beautiful cloud did so much for the town of dairy so he gets 7/10.

And now i will give this movie film trailer thingimijigs an overall rating 9/10 your a star.

Review

L.G.State + and - in a film review

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If you like fantasies this is for you.

The cloud came from the sea. He was different.

He helped out people. There was a fire and he saw people struggling to put it out so he rained and put out the fire. Then he went over the sunset across the ocean. It could've been better if it didn't end as a beer commercial and if we saw what he got after he helped out. But I was happy he was free and he helped out it was very inspiring. This is suitable for 10 - 30.

I give this a 2.5 out of 5.

the lego story

The lego story

Have you ever wondered about the story behind lego well i now know it all started when a oley closed down his business and started making wooden toys in 1932 but the  business burnt down twice so his son thought why don’t we get a plastic molding machine so oley and his son started to make plastic bricks oley’s sons kid tested it by making a rocket but when he picked it up it fell straight to the ground so oley’s son thought they needed holes to clamp it together   and now you can pick up your creations without it crashing to the ground so over all it is awesome but i don’t like animated films it is good for all ages i rate this a 9.5 out of ten.

                  ze legos story

Have you ever wondered where lego started, why it became so popular well if you really want to know read this review. This guy named ole in 1932 in denmark ran a carpentry factory but it shut down and ole lost his wife. Then ole started making wooden toys and his son Godfrey helped him. But then there was a fire and ole’s company called LEGO was decimated. But ole rebuilt his factory and godfrey took over the company. They started making plastic bricks but it wouldn’t stick together so godfrey built bricks with studs and holes in them and godfrey’s son took over and built legoland and that’s the history.

Pro-it tells the proper history of lego. Con-not enough detail.

I think this short film can only be watched by 8-100 year olds. I give this story a 5 out of 5   

the lego story

Lego story

What is involved in a book/movie report?

Have you ever been playing with lego and wondered how was it created? Well in the late 1934 this man had to close down his workshop, Because they were running out of money to pay the bills. So all the workers left with no job, he was not tempted to give up.

After the man started making wooden toys like trucks and ducks. One day a royal man come to check out all the toys then he wanted all the stock for the summer holiday, so they started working all day and all night. But all of a sudden they got a phone call saying that he doesn’t have enough money to pay for all the toys.   

In 1951 they went through a fire and remake the workshop it was 30 metres bigger. After that in 1972 they had a bigger fire and nothing was useful! He was not tempted to give up.                

the lego story

The lego story

Do you remember that time when you nagged your mum to get lego All that time when you put the Lego bricks together. do you think it was made by straight out of the head well you're wrong I'm going to tell a massive review on how LEGO was officially originated.

It all started like this.  In 1932 olay the carpenter had his job dismissed due to the company. The company was not earning enough money to pay the workers. So olay thought of making his own wooden toys. He would work all day long sanding and cutting the leftover wood from his carpentry .His children we're really impressed on how his father was proceeding with these wooden toys.  One child Godfrey was very impressed so he decided to join his father in this journey. It was for the best because olay was not great at typing.  The company went through some rough patches. Along the way olays wife died. All these rough times made olay quit. Instead olay keep trying. Olay keep thinking of what has wooden toy business could be cool .sadly olay passed away so Godfrey took over. He called the business lego and made heaps of bricks the business was successful. I rate this 5 out of 5. Age appropriate for all ages

The History of Lego Review

The History of lego was a great true history film. You should definitely watch the film. Because after you watch it you won't think lego is a square plastic block. The lego film is a about a named olay who started lego in 1934, lego started off as wooden toys.Then olay  sadly passed away then his son godfrey took over then godfrey's son kell took over and then the generation just went on and on till now. Some Negatives were that there was 2 fires one when olay had lego and one when godfrey had lego, a few deaths, They didn't get any sales  and when they sold wooden toys a guy brought heaps of them but then he couldn’t buy them because he went bankrupt. But there were some positives like First starting up lego, making the wooden lego and plastic lego and rebuilding the factory bigger when it burnt down twice. I think the age appropiate for this lego history film is 5+. I rate this a 4 out of 5, because I think they could have done better with the graphics of the filming. Also it was too long for a film.

taking flight

Taking flight review

I watched this mini movie on adventure and imagination it's about a boy that's dad has to go to work but he has to drop his son off at his grandads. But this kid finds a cart and some photos. So he tries to climb up and get them but he falls and then the grandad takes him through this amazing world of imagination and they attacked aliens, ran away from crazy sewer monkeys etc and the dad starts playing as well and soars through space in a rocket ship. The positives of this movie i think were how this imagination has been passed through this family's generations and how they are going through space on a big adventure. The bad thing about this movie is that it is animated but absolutely everything else was good. I would say this is for 1 - 8 year olds and because of all the amazing imagination i rate this little movie a 3.5 out of 5 stars but overall it will give kids lots of imagination after they watch it.

Taking flight

Taking flight is a short animated film that all the little kids will love, especially if they have a big imagination and like to go on adventures.the film is based on 1 kid,1 dad and 1 grandad.the film is good but probably too young for my age of 9 years and 9 months i recon it is more for the recommended 1-6 years old but overall it is one of the best animated films i’ve seen it’s way better wing it.i rate this a 5.5 out of 10  because it’s a good short film but not my type.

Taking Flight review!

Taking Flight

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Taking Flight is a short film about family having fun with their imagination. The dad to work so he lets Grandpa take care of the child.

Grandpa and the child and the adorable unforgettable teddy go on magical adventures to the jungle , a river full of crocodiles and an alien invasion and in the end the family goes on a trip to the moon!

If you have a big imagination this is the movie for YOU!

I am happy that in the end the family is brought together.

This movie is suitable for 4 - infinity. I gave this movie a 5 out of 5.

Taking flight

If you are into imagination you will like this movie it's about a kid and grampa and his dad they go through an imaginary world getting attack by characters in their imagination.

Key points in the story are to use your imagination more in your life so use it more.

Positives and negative positive i like that a family all are imagination together.Negative i think it could've been a little bit longer positives it's a family short film for kids that like short films but everyone should like it.

Age for this movie is my opinion is seven and a half years old

Rating I would give it a ten. It was a good short movie make sure to watch it soon you will like it .

Taking Flight- Film Review

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This is a short film called ‘Taking Flight’. It's about a young boy looking at a photo of his dad and his Grandpa having fun and then he the young boy and his Grandpa used their imagination.  A  Positive is that it is suitable for little kids and explores  the wonders of your imagination.   A Negative is that it is not really exciting or really motivating for slightly older kids. I think it  is  mainly for 3-7 year-olds.  I give the short film 8.5 out of 10. It's telling us 2 important life lessons: For younger kids use your imagination and for older kids no matter how old you are you can still have fun.

TAKING FLIGHT

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If you like imaginative adventures then taking flight is the perfect movie clip for you.

This short film shows me how an elderly interacts with a child through visionary imagination.They create vivid pictures in there amazing mindsets.The elderly plays with the kid through generations.A red cart.when his dad was younger the dad had a red cart.The bit I liked the most was when they fell down the waterfall.The Part I did not like was when the boy fell out of the car.This short film is age appropriate to all ages . I rate this a 4.5.

          

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I loved the Taking Flight film. There was heaps of the kid and the grandpa using their imagination which I thought was awesome if little kids were watching it. The child wanted to play at the park but the dad was busy so he dropped him off at his grandpa's place. The little boy found a photo of his dad and his grandpa in a red wagon. His grandpa saw him looking at the photo and then took him in the red wagon on a massive adventure down the street using their imagination and seeing the jungle, aliens and the sky because they were in a plane. The thing that really stood at for me was the imagination and that all generations of people old and young can have fun and use their imagination. This short film Taking flight can be for any age who has a big imagination and likes adventures. I give this film a 10 out of 10!

  

  Students should not have to do a persuasive speech in front of a large audience

Mr D announces that it’s speeches time again. My heart sinks and my head drops down. I look around the class and see the nerves on my classmates faces. I’ve had enough. People shouldn’t be put through this torture.And i'm hear to put a stop to it.yet i'm literally doing the thing i'm saying you shouldn't.

Firstly it's just hard to pick a topic or if it's a pursude or informing one.You want it to be something you're interested in but other people might not be.it's hard to start for me my mind's just blank i'd rather be running laps around the field or doing maths.For a lot of you it's quit easy an idea just pops in your head and BAME! Yor at your desk writing away in my head i'm just thinking “HOW?,how are you so good at this yet my speech i've written here is top of the line,5/5,amazing the best,ok I might be exaggerating
“little” bit there but it's mostly true.

Secondly, some people get nervous on stage and mess up or just stands with their mind blank.you could practise saying your speech to your family.But some people just don't want to do it.To me you should have a choice to choose if you want to do a speech or not.I know it's a good skill to learn and that's the reason we do it but some people just don't want to.

Why should we have to do a speech I think the teachers should have to do a speech to.Im saying this well...because I couldn't think of something else to write for this paragraph,so yeah.. That's my third paragraph yay,no this not the end of paragraph three there's more yes more.while we kids work so hard thinking and going through this torture the teacher just sits at the table and sometimes has a writing conference while we just sit there doing something impossible for some.And some times Mr D just has a nice yummy chocolate biscuits while we have to finish these really hard SPEECHES!!!!!!      

So all up i think we should have a choice for doing a speech or not and the teachers should have to do one to (if they want) I hope you agree with me and we can get rid of these speeches for good!

Bye RYBO

how to annoy your brothers

Have you always wanted to annoy your brothers so so bad here are five ways to get them really really good and you will not regret going it i mean it .

Step1 are you the youngest child in your family. If you are you can annoy your older brothers so so good and if they tell on you your parents won't believe them because they are older than you so they believe  you can keep doing it and keep doing and you won't get in trouble that's only one make sure you only do it when your parents

Step2 are you sick of getting less food than your older  brothers well i am there is how to get their food that you like and give them food from your plate.

that you don't like then you have more food and food you like but just don't tell them or anyone that you teach there food then just keep doing it .

Step3 are you always wanted to be the boss of your brothers here is how to do it. like say get me a drink or food if you don't i'll tell on you so they should then give you what you wont . that is how to be the boss of you  brothers then you can boss them for ever and ever .

Step4 do you want to annoy your brothers so so easily all you need to do is do the silent treatment or you can try   and step it up a notch and when they are trying to touch to you just walk away and keep doing or just stare at them and try and do all of them at once.

Step5 hide your brothers stuff all through the house every five min just move to where you hide their stuff  then they should start  to get annoyed with everyone then just say that you found their stuff one by one every  five mins.

Outro i hope i gave you five good ways to really annoy your brothers i hope you decide to really annoy your brothers.

Picture this a robot doing whatever  you want or a car  flying you wherever you want. Obviously you know Technologies are changing as in cars are going to be driving themselves and  phones healing themselves that kind of thing but the Best type of tech that i think should be used more  in the future  Is robots. As we are  kids what would you prefer : robots or flying cars personally I think robots you might not but I do and Here are three reasons why.

P.1 have you Is a kid ever wondered what would be better for you: a flying car or a robot. You should pick robots  because well I know that it would be awesome to fly wouldn't just picture. But just think what if you  fall out of the car while 15000 feet in the air you would die but a robot may not fly but how damn cool  would it be to have a metal person doing whatever you want!!!! # robots for life.

P.2  didya know that there are about 4,000  robots working for the military! Wow! Just imagine a giant metal dude charging at you with a rapid fire shotgun!! You still think flying cars are  cool i mean what do yah think flying cars can do in the military it’s only like a two seater so the pilot and  1 soldier so what's the point and just to clarify what would you rather lose about $1.2 million as in a robot or a life? See robots are better.

P.3 do you know  how many movies have robots in   them, all ages in fact i will tell you them well i'll list a couple in their age group.  Kids movies-  big hero 6,wall-e and robots and teenager to adult movies like terminator, robocop, the matrix and way way way more  including possibly the greatest robot movie series of all time star wars. How many  movies with flying cars are  there huh!  If you said tonnes then there only science fiction so if you wanna watch a movie pick one of the robot ones not booooooring science fiction movies. You obviously want an action packed film with humour have a look at these movies and watch one with robots unless you want to be bored as heck

Concl

In the following paragraphs i have explained the following why robots are better than flying cars: 1 what’s bad about a flying car 2 the military and 3 robot movies if you help me we can make robots a real thing ( i don’t know how.) as in very popular in da future.

Do you hate your dads jokes?                                                                                           

Well imagine this you have a

Friend around,Your sitting on         

the couch chilling with lollies

And popcorn but then your

Dad walks in.You and your

Friend looks at each other

And thinks “what is he doing”

And he says “why do bears

Have hairy coats”fur protection

And that's when it gets embarrassing

Firstly really embarrassing dad jokes are

Absolutely the worst and I say the worst

I did a survey on room 6 The Question was

Do you get embarrassed by your dads jokes?

The results were 66% for yes they are embarrassing

And 34% for no they are not embarrassing.I talked

To a few people about dad jokes and most people

Hate their dad jokes especially out in public.

2.Dad jokes that annoys you are not cool.Imagine

This your dad is sitting on the couch in your lounge,

And you walk up to your dad and say”I'm hungry”and

He replies like Hi hungry I'm dad,fine then I feel like

A sandwich and he replies you don't look like a sandwich

Then i get so frustrated and then it feels like you just wanna

Scream your heart out,and then when you're actually hungry its not cool or funny.But if he keeps on doing it go ask your other

Parent for food.

3.Dad jokes you don't actually get but you laugh at to make

Your dad feel funny.should you stop laughing at dad jokes

You don't get because would it make him feel funny then would he keep on telling his jokes then you would be stuck in a humongous massive bubble with heaps of dad jokes in it,sometimes that's me but can you imagine.

4.Repeating your dad your dad jokes is a massive,big,fat X

Do not repeat your dads jokes they are called dad jokes for

A reason.Dad jokes mean dads read them not kids.Unless your

Growing up to be like your dad like most kids do but do not repeat their jokes.But seriously dads read their own jokes because their jokes are bad.I reckon I can tell a better joke

Then dads and dads have had way more experience with jokes then me.

So seriously did i just give you enough reasons why dad jokes are bad or what and dads don't say you're weird,terrible jokes around your kids friends because it can get really embarrassing

.you guys out there if you want your dad to stop saying his jokes out in public bring up an embarrassing moment of him then he will stop trust me.Remember my 4 reasons 1.Bring up an embarrassing moment of him 2.If he makes a joke when your hungry go to your other parent 3.If some jokes are pretty good but you don't get them still laugh 4.Do not repeat your dads jokes.Thank you.

L.G:Organise my ideas into paragraphs.

Hi! Guys!Today I am gonna be talking about how to keep your friendship and how can you make new friends.Friends are important,VERY important.So,how to keep your friendship will be a BIG question.And come on,learn with me!

First,I bet sometimes you and your friend will have some different ideas.Don’t be angry.Cause angry will make you no respect,no trust and no peace.You can keep talking with he/she,and find out a halfway idea.This will be the best,right?Sometimes you guys will be angry for anything.What are you gonna do is: don’t be the people who angry first.

Second,believe your friend.This is easy,important and great.It can help you to keep your friendship.You can say the sentence like:Come on!We can do it together!

Finally,you should send something to your friend when his/her birthday.You can make some cards,DIY,drawings,origamis or something else.BUT! Don’t buy them in the SHOP!That’s not good enough if you buy them in the shop.Cause it can’t shows your sincerity.So you‘d better made the gifts by yourself.

These are my 3 points.Hope it can help you.