Terraria

16-5-17

Terraria

S.O.S -use time connectives to order paragraphs e.g. firstly, finally.

L.G.introduce argument at the start of each paragraphs

Terraria build,craft,survive. A survival game. Get resources. Build a house get ready for battle.

Easy mode, mobs during the day are only slimes. Mobs at night are zombies,flying eyes,bats it’s bad but it’s only easy mode.

Hard mode, I know there's no normal mode but i don't know why. The 3 bosses are the destroyer,the twins,skeletron prime. You need to defeat these bosses to go on expert mode.

Expert mode,The weapons.the terra blade is probably the best melee weapon, the last prison is the mana weapon, the mine drill is the best mining weapon. If you want armor you can get these types of armor. The first armor in the game is solar armor its the best protection armor in the game. The second armor is nebla armor the best armor for mana weapons like the last prison.

That’s all but there’s more things 1500 things to explore.

 

Ps4 vs X Boxes

LG to use paragraph graphs to organise my ideas  

Sos to time connectto order programs firstly finally

Intro which is better a ps4 or a xboxs? I think a ps4 is better here are there reason why firstly gamer xbox is older than the ps4 so you broble think ps4 is better they both are good sony ps4 is sony  and xboxes is microsoft

Secondary gamer how  controllers work and the system the controllers for ps4 controllers buttons have shapes and xbox have letters and you can charge you phone xbox can do the same

Theired facts gamers ps4 hsa 4 star rating and xboxes 4 star rating the bs4 came out in 2014 and xbox came out in 2001to day they bofe are cool

I hope i gave you good reason why  i think they are bofr as cool i hope i convinced you to get a xbox or a ps4

16.5.17

L.G use paragraphs to organise my ideas

S.O.S

use time to connectives to order paragraphs e.g firstly secondly

Introduce argument at the start of each paragraph  

Use at least 5 persuasive words from list

Use the audience name in each paragraphs

I’m so tired I wish we could start school later because I can sleep in and I can finish my homework so I won’t have to move down on the target and finally people won’t be grumpy at school.

Board of trustees do you know that when kids sleep in they get a better chance of learning. When I wake up in the morning I never want to get up because my bed is so incredibly comfy! Mr Elder If we start school later school later everyone will get a chance and no one will be grumpy. Rechchs have also shown that after people sleep they they tend to retain and perform better on memory tasks.

Mr Elder do you want kids finishing their homework and passing tests that teachers give them will I do in these ways homework expands expands upon what is done is done during the day in the classroom. Kids should in the morning when their not tired and they can’t think.

Mr Eldar I hope you know now why SPS should start school later. SPS can finish their homework in the morning and they can sleep in.

L.G use paragraphs to organise my ideas

S.O.S use audience name in each paragraph.

Introduce each argument in each paragraph

Use at least 5 persuasive words

            More sport at sps!

I'm so bored.I wish we had more sport at sps.Mr Moore i'm going to give you 3 absolutely stunning reasons why we should have way more sport at sps.

firstly,Mr Moore.we need more sports so people can go out of there comfort zone and try new sports.Its good so when they dont want to keep playing the same sport they can do something different.You guys want people trying new things.

secondly,Mr Moore,I know you like participating in sport and other things.I know you want our school to be the best.Well bring in more sports because kids have heaps of energy to let out.I know kids like me want to get out and burn off energy and you want kids happy at school not unhappy.

lastly,Mr Moore, kids want to get better at sport.When kids get better at sport they feel better in themselves.It shows that 90.9% want to get better at sport and that is fantastic.

Mr Moore,’’ people say who cares about sport’’but actually it is good for your brain because it's a life cycle move,eat and be in a good mood for your brain to recharge and learn.

In my opinion we should have way more sport at sps.I know you care about sport.Make it happen Mr Moore!

L.G: Use paragraphs to organise my ideas

S.O.S: Use time connectives to order paragraphs  

WHY WE SHOULD BE ABLE TO COOK AT SCHOOL

Dear Mr Elder,

We should have more cooking opportunities at school. Cooking is a great way to reward yellow zone learners. We would have more freedom if you let us cook.Here are three spectacular reasons why we should be able to cook at Stratford Primary School.

Firstly,

Mr Elder,

When we  grow up and leave home we need to know how to cook, so we don't stave. You don't want your students buying disgusting fatty takeaways for lunch and dinner.Do you? I hope you don't! You want us to be successful in life  don't you?

Secondly,

Mr Elder,

Don't you think being in yellow zone is obviously a privilege? So why don't you let people in yellow zone do baking. Like I said before baking is a skill for life. People who can't bring lunch to school can have some of the baking that we do. On fridays it's the end of the week and everyone's tired.Yeah? Am I right? So It wouldn't hurt to take some time out of class.

Finally,

Mr Elder,

For me personally it would be a great time to learn about all the different cuisines like French foods, Spanish foods etc.I could name lots more.Don't you want us to learn about different cultures and what they eat? For an example I love Spanish food and I also love mexican food like tacos. Indian food would be a great one for us to study.

Mr Elder,

We are your hard working students! Above I have explained the three reasons why we should be able to cook at school. Yellow zone learners should be able to cook at school, when we grow up we need to know how to cook and learning about different cultures would be amazing for me. It would be thrilling to be able to cook. It would be extremely great to do this!IT'S UP TO YOU MR ELDER!

By Amy Vickers

  

why we should cleaner bathrooms

Why the toilets should be cleaner

     LG. to use paragraphs to organise my ideas

     SOS.

            use time connectives to order my paragraphs

             introduce argument to the start of each paragraph

            use at least 5 persuasive word from the list

            use the audience in each paragraph

OMG!! I just walked in the bathroom and their is horrible stench that i can’t even describe.Mr Elder yes I am speaking to you ,the school is your problem so the toilets are to so you need to do something about the the hygiene , the toilet paper and the locks.

Firstly, hygiene.At the moment the bathrooms are extremely unhygienic but you can change that can’t you.People shouldn’t have to hold their pee in cause of the state of our bathrooms,really.People at sps are being so cruel to our bathrooms by wetting toilet paper and throwing it onto the roof ,putting graffiti on the walls and blocking the drains so people can’t wash their hands.Again people shouldn’t have to squat to go toilet.

Secondly, toilet paper.when people are busting they sometimes find that their is no toilet paper you can fix that I know you can.People suffer by not going toilet you are holding in toxic bacteria that could kill you.

Thirdly, when i went toilet i shut the door and it didn’t lock people need privacy when they go toilet.People can walk in on you and that's not cool when they interrupt your business.

over all I have explain that our bathrooms need to be cleaner because of how unhygienic it is,the toilet paper and how the bathroom locks don't work.we need our bathrooms cleaner Mr Elder I have told you why so their is no reason to not clean them.

WE NEED A CANTEEN

Did you forget to give your kids food just give them

money then the canteen will give them food and it is raising money for the school. So your kids can have a

cool school. and you’re probably thinking how are we going to raise $1200 well we can make an online donation and All the kids can make a donation. Also its

good education for your kids!

My point is we can have a canteen but we just need your help so donate your money and help the school make this place better for your kids. SO JUST DO IT!!

why there should not be a school shop

Why we should not have school shop

Who wants a school shop well I don't I have 3 reasons why there should not be a school shop at sps.

Firstly, sugar.If you have a shop your obviously going to sell sugar who in the world would have a shop with no lollies.If we have a school canteen and sell sugar people are going to come back and buy lollies everyday and probably get obese or diabetes.Obese can lead to heart disease and both those lead to death.Diabetes can make you buy a pump.Kids shouldn't be buying things they don't need like lollies.

Secondly,money.Where in the world are we going to get 4,500 .If we do fundraise that much we could buy other useful things like technology ,sports equipment and many other useful things.It takes 100 man hours to build a canteen,again where are we going to get the money to pay the builders.

Thirdly,waste.Buying this canteen is only going to cause more landfill because we are buying plastic.Our school is trying to be a rubbish free school but with this shop it’s just making more rubbish

The people who say that the money will go towards cancer the lollies that they sell causes cancer.

So now I have explained why their should not be a school shop at sps because selling fatty foods could make you obese or have diabetes,the money whos going to pay and the waste.I Absolutely disagree with this outrageous idea.

dear mum and dad

Dear mum and dad

I hear people say jump someone jumps out of the boat then another and another most of the soldiers drown before they even make it to shore to begin the war the bags weigh so much the weight takes it down with them .They start to shoot .They fire bombshells to the shore which go crashing into the sand and water .Bodies lay on the ground with bullets all over the bodies with blood surrounding the wounds .I look left and right while dodging the quick fast bullets that swift past my head. I find an injured soldier I carry him .He has a three bullets in one leg he screams i cry .I drop him in the trench . I jump in the trench and grab bandages to help this poor guy.this war is so dreadful it makes me want to cry .I still hear gunshots and people howling for help.I smell the smoke off the bombshells.More bodies drop dead i hear a bullets sound come towards me BANG!!! Aaaahhhhhhhhh!!!! I scream in pain.Im sitting in the metics room now.Hopefully this is not the last letter i send you.I love you mum and dad.

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L.G create a mood of fear/horria

SOS language that creates fear

Adjectives noun

See hear

Dear mum and dad.

As I drop into a trench… Suddenly I hear sounds of soldiers screaming towards their death. I see my mate dropping down after a gun shoot straight threw his head, Tears meated up in my eyes, I become good friends with him. I thought to myself I hope this is all a dream, I will wake up and this will be all over. 321 I woke up in terror, nothing changed. I loaded up my gun aimed and shoot I sprinted back to our trench hoping I didn’t kill any soldier that was fighting for switzerland.

L.G: To create a mood of fear or horror

S.O.S: Launguage of fear

Dear Mum & Dad

Today was the scariest day of my life!! Because a man drowned from the massive heavy bags we had to carry. He yelled. While screaming, “ help help.”  I didn’t know what to do. But once we got to shore, the germans started firing bullets. All the men and I, jumped into the trenches. I stood paralyzed, as I could see my mate Sam on the ground, as well as 50 other men, pouring out with blood Pwooooo Pwooooo two bullets skimmed my ears. I grabbed the gun… Pwooooo Pwooooo the bullets went fast. My heart beated… as my two other mates… Got a gruesome shot to the head. They were dropping fast and had blood all over them too. I felt their heart beats stop. I knew that was the end of them. It was so hot I was sweating in fear. Oh I also got a shot to the leg it hurt and I screamed but i’m okay now because i’m in the medic room. Okay love you see yah. Hope I can write back another letter soon!!!