why we should cleaner bathrooms

Why the toilets should be cleaner

     LG. to use paragraphs to organise my ideas

     SOS.

            use time connectives to order my paragraphs

             introduce argument to the start of each paragraph

            use at least 5 persuasive word from the list

            use the audience in each paragraph

OMG!! I just walked in the bathroom and their is horrible stench that i can’t even describe.Mr Elder yes I am speaking to you ,the school is your problem so the toilets are to so you need to do something about the the hygiene , the toilet paper and the locks.

Firstly, hygiene.At the moment the bathrooms are extremely unhygienic but you can change that can’t you.People shouldn’t have to hold their pee in cause of the state of our bathrooms,really.People at sps are being so cruel to our bathrooms by wetting toilet paper and throwing it onto the roof ,putting graffiti on the walls and blocking the drains so people can’t wash their hands.Again people shouldn’t have to squat to go toilet.

Secondly, toilet paper.when people are busting they sometimes find that their is no toilet paper you can fix that I know you can.People suffer by not going toilet you are holding in toxic bacteria that could kill you.

Thirdly, when i went toilet i shut the door and it didn’t lock people need privacy when they go toilet.People can walk in on you and that's not cool when they interrupt your business.

over all I have explain that our bathrooms need to be cleaner because of how unhygienic it is,the toilet paper and how the bathroom locks don't work.we need our bathrooms cleaner Mr Elder I have told you why so their is no reason to not clean them.