16.5.17

L.G use paragraphs to organise my ideas

S.O.S

use time to connectives to order paragraphs e.g firstly secondly

Introduce argument at the start of each paragraph  

Use at least 5 persuasive words from list

Use the audience name in each paragraphs

I’m so tired I wish we could start school later because I can sleep in and I can finish my homework so I won’t have to move down on the target and finally people won’t be grumpy at school.

Board of trustees do you know that when kids sleep in they get a better chance of learning. When I wake up in the morning I never want to get up because my bed is so incredibly comfy! Mr Elder If we start school later school later everyone will get a chance and no one will be grumpy. Rechchs have also shown that after people sleep they they tend to retain and perform better on memory tasks.

Mr Elder do you want kids finishing their homework and passing tests that teachers give them will I do in these ways homework expands expands upon what is done is done during the day in the classroom. Kids should in the morning when their not tired and they can’t think.

Mr Eldar I hope you know now why SPS should start school later. SPS can finish their homework in the morning and they can sleep in.