Tuesday, October 31, 2017

why hurricanes are better than crusaders

All you crusaders fans need to be taught a lesson. Hurricanes are strong, powerful and fit. This means they cruise through the game with a win all the time. Everyone that watches super rugby will know that the crusaders won against hurricanes but you don’t see them winning against sharks 42-0 do you?

I know that hurricanes have only won super rugby once but they are still way better then crusaders.Here  are the class pointer views 70% of the class voted hurricanes and 30% voted crusaders so the class  likes hurricanes way more than crusaders!I don’t know if it’s because of the all blacks or what.
                
Crusaders may have won it heaps but there's a bit of a gap between the last time they won it and when they won it  this year.

The hurricanes have way more history than the crusaders and have had more retired all blacks like ma’a nonu, conrad smith, piri weepu oh and you can’t forget the legend jonah lomu and the current all blacks like beauden barrett, tj perenara, julian savea, dane coles, ardie savea and via fifita.

I already would have proven  my point but i hope that changed your vote to hurricanes cause if it didn't all of us hurricanes fans are gonna make you regret your decision so you better watch out

Monday, October 30, 2017

                                               Ocean Pollution
Stop,stop people, poor sea animals are losing their sweet life from our disgusting harmful waste.We,Together, we can stop pollution right now.The less waste the better!! This issue needs to be addressed. So it starts here: Since the 1940s, plastic use has increased. There are a few things that is taking sea life away like:drinking cans containers and that includes  plastic bottles,chemical containers heaps of of chemicals,bleach bottles and plastic bags.


Scientist and environmental groups since 1980s have more closely addressed the problem and how it affects on public health and wildlife. We know that cargo ships and cruise liners had dumped 14 billion pounds of garbage into the ocean. Over1 million seabirds and 1 million sea mammals are killed by pollution each year. Do you see how bad its getting.

Over the past few decades human activities have affected of the life in earth's oceans. We are spreading harmful used things like oil, Plastic, Harmful waste and chemical particles into the ocean. The ocean is dying because of this. Come on people, How would you feel if people dumped garbage in your garden or on your land. How would you feel?


Supermarkets are trying to get rid of use of plastic bags and make people bring their own bags instead. Use the boxes that the food comes in like come on! Make sure we all dispose of pollution Properly.” look, Stop there's  a bin over there, Put it in there instead of dropping it on the ground!”
“ Why is it going to matter”


So I hope you have learned more about pollution and go home and warn your parents about pollution and try to maxim waste not to make waste. Hope you have learned about scientist and environmental groups, and what cargo ships and cruise liners were doing, and what happened in the past that is still happening. Also the chemical and plastic and more is going into our environment and seas and oceans. Literally it's you're choice, do you want to let poor animals die because of waste well it's your choice make it good because animals are DYING!!!
Cats


Imagine, finding a cat that adours you and you can keep it for life. After a horrible day after school doing spelling test and other stuff all you want is to lay down with your pet cat it will become your shadow wherever you go they will go. So what do you do stop imaging and have this experience yourself.

Firstly, did you know cats are one of the most popular pets in the world. There are over 500 million domestic cats. Cats conserve their energy by sleeping for an average of 12 to 16 hours a day. Thats 70% of a cat's life. The domestic cat is a small, typically furry, carnivorous mammal often called “House cats.”

Secondly, did you know cats can’t taste sweetness and spice? If cats smell spice it's not good for them. That's why cat treats are not available in pet stores. Scientists do know that cat’s can taste things we cannot taste.For years it was known but not truly understood. Sugar and spice and everything nice? Not so much for cats.

Thirdly, did you know humans and cats have been associated for over 10000 years that's a long time. Cats can live for an average of 13 to 17 years. In the wild cats live for 4 to 5 years. The oldest cat lived to 28 years old!!Also where you aware that a group of three cats is called a clower?


Finally, I really hope you will get a pet cat and if you do just remember these facts to keep your cat healthy and strong.


  

Sunday, October 29, 2017

speech

Purpose: To stop it
Topic: Depression
Audience: Everyone

Have you ever been lying down watching tv and this ad came on? “Have you been feeling down,feeling you would be better dead than alive take the test at depression.org.nz.” I cerntley have seen it and we depression need  to stop now.

Out of curiosity I took the test I got 21 out of 27. I am
completely shocked I went to tell my mum immediately. A few months later I got 24 out of 27. I was horrified. I was starting to think those scary thoughts.The year before that i had tried to kill myself because my parents had split, people were dying and i had to move. It was definitely a hard time. Not just for me but for my family and friends.

When you ask people like me how they are feeling they  will probably respond with fine, f= feeling i= I’m n= nothing to e= everyone. Feeling im nothing to everyone. I was curious and searched up depression on images, found out sometimes fine is not what it seems. 1 million  people die a year from committing suicide. This should end now. All the suffering people have been through is not what should be happening. We need to put smiles back on  people's  faces.

People need our
help.We can save the 1 million people who die a year. We need to stop this now. They need better Health, Help and lives. Depression is a illness. And if you if you have it you feel like nothing all the time it's not sadness or anger it's  a illness. A terrifying illness which affects good people. If we let those 1 million people die each year we will be extinct. We are the only things that can solve this. Now go help people live their lives with joy.  That's all that they need to have the courage to stay alive.


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Thursday, October 19, 2017

winston peters

L.g:elaborate on good ideas
S.o.s: use good ideas

Dear mr peters

I am writing to you to recommend that you choose a coalition with national.
Suport nz families
Mr peters,national is helping nz families  get ahead
With more jobs and better public services for all new zealanders.
An extra $120m to christchurch arena

National are putting an extra $120 million towards the construction of  a new arena in christchurch.taking the government's total to $179 million.
Increase support of first house buyers
National are making it easier  for first house buyers to find a house for a cheaper price.

I hope that convinced you to choose a coalition with national.

L.G:Organise my ideas into paragraphs.
S.O.S-Use good paragraph.
Dear Winston Peters:
I think you should choose Labour.I have 3 point to show you why.
Clean river
First,they 'll clean the rivers.You know,rivers is very important in New zealand.And Labour will clean the rivers.They 'll restore our rivers and lakes to a truly swimmable place.Clean rivers is good for everyone cause everyone owns the water.
Jobs
Second,if you choose Labour,New Zealanders can find jobs easier.Cause Labour 'll help young entrepreneurs to start their business or help others find other jobs.And they 'll make multinationals pay their fair share.
For older New Zealanders
Finally,Labour 'll support for older New Zealanders.If you choose labour,the super 'll stay at 65,they 'll give $8b more money for older New Zealanders to keep their health and 1000 more police for older New Zealanders.
Here is the 3 point for you,I hope you can choose Labour!
Dear Mr Peters
We are writing to you to recommend that you should choose a coalition with National. And here are three reasons why.

Firstly, National is putting down house prices which is great for poor families and homeless so they can look forward to to there first homes.

Secondly, National is going to put an $9.25 increase a week. Workers get about 85% of low income workers who lose about $520 a year in tax.

Thirdly, Labour is to busy warning about clean rivers and killing fishes habitat and national on the other hand is trying to put roofs of homeless poor and people that are poor.

There you have it three reasons why you should form a coalition with National.
  

Wednesday, October 18, 2017

L.g have some good ideas and elaborate
S.o.s use good ideas
- elaborate

Dear mr peters
I am writing to inform you about who i think you should choose :labour or national? i think labour and here are three reasons why  

EDUCATION
Do you really think bill english would pay 6 billion dollars our own mental education? No he’ll probably just spend it all on dairy farming like his policies say.Any ways 1.8b of the 6 billion that labour will do  will go to deliver teachers to all of the schools around the country including i hope stratford primary school ( my school.)

Clean rivers
Do you like swimming winston? I bet so you want clean rivers. National’s not doing it so vote for labour. Greens is also an enviroment party so i'll bet they’ll do it to.

Parental leave
Labours going to extend parental leave from 18 weeks to 26 weeks. That’s 8 more weeks! That’s a lot of time! and nationals just thinking of new roads. Really? Roads? Roads are perfectly fine? Aren’t they? Probably don’t choose national.  

In this story i have explained the following things why labour is better
Education, clean rivers and parental leave..
So if you like my story then you should agree with me then vote for labour!

By lucas jacobson
Year 5 room 6

Stratford primary school.

Dear mr peters
I'm writing to you to recommend that you choose a coalition  with party vote national.


Support young
Families

Mr peters if you go with national.thay will support young families do you really won't poorly families living  under no roof, no money, or no food.


Support new
Home buys  

Mr peters first home buyers would be excited to buy their first  home so party national will help cheaper better home buyers.

Electric cars

Mr peters more electric cars around new zealand  means less polison it's better than gas powered cars  and that's means less trees will be dieing and animals

So now you should go with party national  

Tuesday, October 17, 2017

Dear Mr Peters

I am writing to you to recommend that you should join with National.

Firstly, National is going to give lower taxes to people so they have more money to spend on stuff they actually need like Groceries, Rent, Petrol, Houses, Apartments, Tickets, Internet and Phone bills.

Secondly, National is going to make no water bills, so people have more money in their pockets to spend on gifts for their friends and family.

Thirdly, Labor is going to make money to clean rivers and forget about all the people in need. Bill english is going to make money and help the parents raise their kids.

Well Mr Peters I have come to an end I really hope you will pick national.