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Dan carter gets ready To shoot

He kicks the ball

Hopes for all

And prevents an all black downfall.

The three little pigs

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Once upon a time There were three little pigs and big But not so bad wolf. They lived in a beautiful  forest with bunnies and cute little duckies One day the wolf looked in the pantry in  for food for lunch, But it was empty so he said after find some food. He went to the first little pig  house, but it was made of straw.  He went up to the door and said, ‘hey Stanley are you in? Wanna have some lunch?”But Stanley said, “go away dog!’ And so he huffed and puffed and blew Stanley's house down.  in the Ruins and he saw lunch , the pig. But he wasn't satisfied. So he set off to Tucker’s house which was made out of sticks he went up to the door and said, “ hey Tucker are you in wanna have some lunch?’’ and he said “ go away bum sniffer!” then he huffed and puffed and blew Tucker’s house down! in amongst the sticks was Tucker and the wolf ate him! But he was not satisfied. The wolf walked up egg’s house and his was made out of bricks then he knocked on the door and said  “hey egg are you in wanna  have some lunch?” but egg said, “go away Flea bitten dog!’’ he was so mad that he climbed through the chimney  and ate egg! And only know was he satisfied with lunch then he went back home and slept for an half an hour!

The end

The big bad wolf

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Intro the three little pigs and the pig bad wolf live next to each other.

The three little pigs are pink fat grumpy  and old the bad wolf is nice gray old flaaffy.  

Onceuponatime  there were three little pigs that are very grumpy everyday  one day the wolf was walking to ask for sugar for his grams cake he went to the stupidest pigs home but the big bad wolf   went to noke on the door he didn't answer but then he had a cold so he haft and he baft and blow the straw home up in the air so he eat the pig up

Pig 2 the one how is a bit smarter so the wolf walked up in a happy mode he knocked on  the door he didn't answer but then he haft and haft and and blow the house down then he eat  the pig and moved on

Pig 3 the smartest of them all the pigs. so he went walking to the3 pigs house he went and knocked on the pigs door  he didn't answer so he haft and he baft and he didn't blow the house  down then

Con 2 min later the cops took the big bad wolf to jail the end

 

Three little pigs

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Once upon a time in a planet far far away, there lived three little, pink, fat Pigs and a sweet innocent Wolf. The three little Pigs had built their houses out of straw, bricks and sticks. They live in a village in a forest.

The Wolf wanted a cup of sugar for his grannies Birthday Cake, he also had a cold. So, he walked down to his neighbours, it was the 1st pink, fat Little pig like a real fat pig, and he yelled “Go away Wolf.” Then the Wolf felt a sneeze coming, so he snuffed and opened his mouth… AHHHH chooooo!!!!!!! The straw house came right down. Then the Wolf said “I haven’t had any dinner,”So the Wolf ate the fat pink pig!

So the Wolf still hadn’t got his sugar for his grannie’s birthday cake. So he went to the next house. He knocked on the door and ,it was the 2nd pink, pig, and he quietly whispered “Go away you BAD BAD Wolf.”But then...AHHH chooooo the sticks came flying and the pig was… DEAD.

But the wolf still needed the sugar for his grannie’s cake. So he went to the next house, like the other version of this story.And it was the 3rd fat, pink pig. But oh no the Wolf felt another sneeze coming he tried to hold it in but AHHH chooo. But guess what? The massive brick house didn’t come down.But the Wolf still didn’t get his one cup of sugar for his grannie’s birthday cake!!!

But the massive brick house didn’t come down.But the Wolf still didn’t get his one cup of sugar for his grannie’s birthday cake!!!

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Once upon a time there lived three pig a cute fluffy wolf and a old village.

One day the cute fluffy wolf made some cupcakes for his dare old granny and ran out of sugar. So he walked down the stoney footpath to his nextdoor neighbor's house.

The first house was a pigs house. He rung the doorbell gently and said “little pig are you in I need some sugar?” No one answered the door so he huffed and he puffed and blew the straw house down. The poor little pig ran to the next house.

So the second pig wasn't very smarter than the first pig since his house was made of sticks. The big bad wolf knocked on the door and said with a soft delicate voice “Can I please use some sugar?” “Go away.” so he huffed and he puffed and he blew the stick house down. The first pig and the second pig ran to the brick house.

The third little pig was the smartest of them all because he built his house was made of bricks. Mr wolf didn’t ask because he knew he was going to say NO so he huffed and he puffed and tried to blow the brick house down. Nothing happened  so he climbed up the chimney and fell in no he landed in the pot.

So in the end mr wolf was never seen again and the three little pigs lived happily ever after.