The big bad wolf
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Intro the three little pigs and the pig bad wolf live next to each other.
The three little pigs are pink fat grumpy and old the bad wolf is nice gray old flaaffy.
Onceuponatime there were three little pigs that are very grumpy everyday one day the wolf was walking to ask for sugar for his grams cake he went to the stupidest pigs home but the big bad wolf went to noke on the door he didn't answer but then he had a cold so he haft and he baft and blow the straw home up in the air so he eat the pig up
Pig 2 the one how is a bit smarter so the wolf walked up in a happy mode he knocked on the door he didn't answer but then he haft and haft and and blow the house down then he eat the pig and moved on
Pig 3 the smartest of them all the pigs. so he went walking to the3 pigs house he went and knocked on the pigs door he didn't answer so he haft and he baft and he didn't blow the house down then
Con 2 min later the cops took the big bad wolf to jail the end
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look what your writing eg a pig bad wolf
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