Thursday, July 27, 2017

The big bad wolf
L.G. use good ideas can elaborate same of these ideas and or elaborate one idea well

S.O.S add extra info to my ideas

Intro the three little pigs and the pig bad wolf live next to each other.
The three little pigs are pink fat grumpy  and old the bad wolf is nice gray old flaaffy.  

Onceuponatime  there were three little pigs that are very grumpy everyday  one day the wolf was walking to ask for sugar for his grams cake he went to the stupidest pigs home but the big bad wolf   went to noke on the door he didn't answer but then he had a cold so he haft and he baft and blow the straw home up in the air so he eat the pig up

Pig 2 the one how is a bit smarter so the wolf walked up in a happy mode he knocked on  the door he didn't answer but then he haft and haft and and blow the house down then he eat  the pig and moved on


Pig 3 the smartest of them all the pigs. so he went walking to the3 pigs house he went and knocked on the pigs door  he didn't answer so he haft and he baft and he didn't blow the house  down then


Con 2 min later the cops took the big bad wolf to jail the end
 


2 comments:

  1. good
    l.g s.o.s
    look what your writing eg a pig bad wolf

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  2. punctuation
    s.o.s
    a bit more writing

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