L.G: To create a mood of fear or horror

S.O.S: Launguage of fear

Dear Mum & Dad

Today was the scariest day of my life!! Because a man drowned from the massive heavy bags we had to carry. He yelled. While screaming, “ help help.”  I didn’t know what to do. But once we got to shore, the germans started firing bullets. All the men and I, jumped into the trenches. I stood paralyzed, as I could see my mate Sam on the ground, as well as 50 other men, pouring out with blood Pwooooo Pwooooo two bullets skimmed my ears. I grabbed the gun… Pwooooo Pwooooo the bullets went fast. My heart beated… as my two other mates… Got a gruesome shot to the head. They were dropping fast and had blood all over them too. I felt their heart beats stop. I knew that was the end of them. It was so hot I was sweating in fear. Oh I also got a shot to the leg it hurt and I screamed but i’m okay now because i’m in the medic room. Okay love you see yah. Hope I can write back another letter soon!!!