S.P.S cooking up a some meals
On monday the 11th of september 2017 the stratford primary school hall was filled with this amazing aroma.Room 6’s year ⅚ students used different sense of style and unique patterns to wow the customers.They used a,mazing food to fill our stomachs and decorations to cover the tables.The restaurant I went to was Italian themed so they called their restaurant name the Italian Meatballers but I was not a big fan of that name.There presentation was outstanding for their entree.They had garlic bread drizzled with Edam cheese.For the main they had meatballs smothered in leggos pasta sauce with spaghetti under the meatballs.For dessert they gave us neapolitan ice cream with chocolate sauce sprinkled with flake crumbs.The table was set ot like the queen was here. There was an ornament in the middle of the table and lollies spread around the table.The waiters came around serving drinks Coke, Raspberry, lemonade and they asked me “what drink would you like madame”?” I’ll have the raspberry”I replied.Then the kind waiter poured the raspberry in my cup.In a few minutes the entree was served and my moth could feel the garlic bread in my mouth before it reached my plate.I could smell the garlic .I picked up my fork and put the garlic bread in my mouth.It was so delicious.When the main came out my mouth was watering.just One bite I thought.The waiter asked me if I enjoyed all my meals.And I said yes.
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