L.G use speech marks
S.O.S
-Use three lots of speech marks
I am standing on the court ready to play, the buzzer goes off we all start playing . It come around to half time Hannah called it.
My heart starts racing.” I go slowly to see the score”... we're winning by one point .” the game is on I whispered to samara.
Me and Ava race down to get the rebound .I yelled to Ava” take it down the other end “. suddenly the other couch called full time.
We drawed ! The two bosses had a massive conference to see if we had 3 minutes extra. We played 3 minutes extra and...we made it into the finals
By lukah
good speech marks
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your next step is to re-read and make sure it makes sense