Tuesday, August 15, 2017

L.G use speech marks
S.O.S
-Use three lots  of speech marks

I am standing on the court ready to play, the buzzer goes off we all start playing . It come  around to half time  Hannah called it.


My heart starts racing.”  I go slowly to see the score”... we're winning by one point  .”  the game is on I whispered to samara.


Me and Ava race down to get the rebound .I yelled to Ava”  take it down the other end “. suddenly the other couch called full time.


We drawed ! The two bosses had a massive conference to see if we had 3 minutes extra. We played 3 minutes extra and...we made it into the finals

By lukah  

2 comments:

  1. good speech marks
    good punctuation

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  2. very good said is dead
    very good direct speech
    your next step is to re-read and make sure it makes sense

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