Mr dombroski
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Mr dombroski‘s hair is like a sandy golden brown.His Eyes are bright blue like the salty sea and his teeth are whiter than snow.His beard is like a fuzzy,prickly,spiky cactus.His moustache is like a reflection of the sun because it is so golden.
His fingernails are like a chewed plant.His lips are shaped like an oval and he has arms as long and thick as a giraffe's neck.His hands are as big as a tarantula's body.
He likes to teach children .He also likes to play monopoly and other board games.Mr Dombroski plays sport such as cricket and rugby.He has a funny sense of humor that's probably why he laughs a lot.
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