Thursday, August 10, 2017


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Ceasar vs Winter

Once there lived 2 apes Ceasar and Winter, Ceasar was  a stubborn ape and winter was a strong white gorilla.

Cesar and Winter sat at a campsite up mount egmont, “are we doing this? go !’’ yelled Ceasar.
doing this?

Winter and Ceasar set of up mount then winter asked “why are we doing this?” “where are we going ?” “be quiet’’ yelled ceasar and moments  later… “are we there yet?” “where are we” asked winter “that's it !” yelled ceasar  “go run now” yelled ceasar “ no,no,no don’t shoot me, i’ll do anything”. “Wait you’ll do anything” “ ok youre my slave offered ceasar, “ok ... i’ll be your slave,” grinned Winter, “ good  now go get me some food” “when” asked winter “NOW”! Yelled ceasar.

4 comments:

  1. you described personalities
    setting
    bit more sense

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  2. csaps
    speech
    .......

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  3. pos-described
    pos punctuation
    ns-sense

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  4. Positive, Speech marks
    Positive, Punctuation
    Positive, Make it make sense

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