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Disneyland

there were two kids named josh and mason they were with mickey mouse

They were walking through disneyland   on the brown bee hive flaws

They saw a big red train  ride  so we  lined up

We go in three minutes on the ride they go side to side straight up hills down hills they go to the end of the ride the driver pulls the brakes then  boom the brackets. The man jumped out of the train josh gets out over his set and climbs into the drivers set andgets sizersccors and cuts the wiyer and it stops then everyone cheers

We name  you the king over disneyland` and disney world

by joshua savage