Wednesday, August 16, 2017

Scooter crash
As I go around the corner with my mate Jason. I feel like I'm on a bullet train.we swerve around the senior court and slow down to jump the  stairs. We are at SPS.

We jump the stairs like it was a centimetre drop from a cliff. Then all of a sudden.we stop,put our backs against the wall and push off.

When I jump I feel like a bird that suddenly I lose control and end up body slamming the ground with a mighty thud! (ouch!) “ugh” i winced. “Are you alright?” asked Jason “yeah i’m good” i coughed (not!) “there’s a duty teacher over there” “would you like me to get her?” “yeah sure”  i stuttered when  Jason went to go get the duty teacher I looked at the damage, my elbow was grazed and bleeding, my hand was sore and bleeding, my knee and leg with stinging and that's about it. I started limping / riding my scooter back to class but Jason caught up with the duty teacher. It was Mrs Dombroski . She put a plaster on me and told me to go fix myself up in class. Then I ended up with about 7 plasters on! (ha ha ha)         

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  1. awesome story lucas
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