Patea vs stratford
The whistle blows at the page street rugby grounds.
I chase the kick and make the first tackle of the game I get back to my feet and get the turnover I call for support “ jaxon kemp I need support!” I pass to kemp who puts it down on the 22 then I pick it up and off load to my brother cadyn who scores. After another 10 minutes at half time patea lead 8-6. I share a good idea with the team “ jaxon cover the front of the lineouts ‘cause your halfback. I’ll cover the back. The whistle blows and I get tackled. Patea gets penalised for flopping and I take the tap, run people over and score. It’s 10-8. We scored another 2 tries and won 12-8. After the match we went for a feed. It was our first time having sausages ‘cause me and kemp had to my 2nd cousin's birthday. boston . “How did you go?” I asked. “We lost” he mumbled. Oh well, we won 12-8,” I laughed.
way to many pictures riley
ReplyDeletewell done on the said is dead
ReplyDeletealso you did well with direct speech
your next step is to re-read to make sure it makes sense
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