Wednesday, August 2, 2017

Jill got caught

L.G:Organisation
S.O.S:Rhymes & Unqiueness
My nursery rhyme!
Jill likes to kill
One day she was hiding while eating
Then started retreating
She was caught by the police
And asked them to release,her from the handcuffs.
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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 2, 2017 at 3:17 PM

    I liked how it rhymed
    It was very detailed
    next step from me would be wright a bit more

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  2. AnonymousAugust 2, 2017 at 5:23 PM

    Awesome piece Alice
    Positive:Great set up
    Positive: Good words

    NS:More ryming

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  3. AnonymousAugust 2, 2017 at 5:24 PM

    Awesome piece Alice
    Positive:Great set up
    Positive: Good words
    NS:More ryming

    ReplyDelete
  4. AnonymousAugust 6, 2017 at 3:08 PM

    1. good set up
    2. L.G
    n.s more ryming

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  5. AnonymousAugust 6, 2017 at 3:30 PM

    1good set up
    2lg
    n.sCommas

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