Tuesday, August 1, 2017

Mrs lime and slime
Mrs Lime loved slime every hour of the day
She mixed the glue
And the shaving foam too
But there was no borax for her to use.
So mrs lime
Found some time to buy borax for slime.
She finished her slime
In a quick amount of time

And then went to climb mount fine

6 comments:

  1. punctuation
    met L.G
    more pictures

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  2. Can rhyme
    punctuation
    have some picture!

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  3. rhyming
    punctuation
    more detail

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  4. met your l.g
    lots of rhyming words
    grab 1 little pic of slime

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  5. Rhyming is great
    Met your l.g
    NS: More detail

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  6. 1.great rhyming
    2.l.g
    n.s.To use some commas

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