L.G.TO ELABORAT MY IDEAS WELL
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Mason has light shine brown her in the daytime and sparkly in the middle of the night he has hazel dark wood eyes he has shimmering white teeth and red pink lips
Mason mack massive red velvet cupcakes with thick icing on the top of them
Mason is a jolly person he's kind to everyone all the time day and night
He wears red jersey that looks like fire and he wears tracksuit pants and black white shoes that look like clouds
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