Thursday, August 24, 2017

L.G: Long sentences and short.
S.O.S: Have 5 short sentences     
Hannah Watkins
Her eyes gilmour as the sun shines on them.They're like diamonds in sky.Her dark brown hair blows in the wind like a river rushing. Her lush eyelashes open and shut. Her silver earring glow in the light of the sun. Her smile says everything about her. EVERYTHING!


Pretty. Amazing. A one of a kind girl. When someone is sad her smile lights up the room. Hannah always works her hardest that she can. She will try hard even if she is tired.


She wears her sparkly, black slip on shoes. No matter what kind of day it is she is always wears comfy clothes. Blue is her favourite colour so her nails are always painted blue. Sometimes she wears headbands.


She loves netball. But sadly she always hurts herself.  She loves doing arts and crafts. All she asks me is wanna do arts and crafts?

4 comments:

  1. Postive: Its about Meee
    Postive: met L.g
    next step: more Info
    From HANNAH WATKINS

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  2. met your L.G
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    n.s a bit bigger story
    lani

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  3. met L.G
    similes are VERY good
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  4. similes
    lg
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