L.G use correct punctuation
S.O.S
-use commas
Once upon a time there was a cat named ginger a yummy sausage and a sweet bird.They loved to play in gardens .
Then came a fine sunny day for the poor hungry cat ginger .
Ginger meowed I can cope without food . one day a delicious sausage fall from the sky.
The cat and the lonely bird we're in bird bath getting ready to catch that delicious sausage suddenly the lonely bird ate the delicious grilled sausage ginger is still very grumpy.
Ginger is still very grumpy. 1 hour later gobble , gobble ginger ate the poor lonely bird . the bird got deliciously gobbled all up
met L.G
ReplyDeletepunctuation
comma?
Postive:problem
ReplyDeletePostive:Setting
Punctuation
From Amy
Positive, You added a setting
ReplyDeletePositive, you had a problem
N.S. Punctuation
you have a great setting
ReplyDeleteyou had a good solution
N.S punctuation