Wednesday, August 9, 2017

  L.G   use correct punctuation
   S.O.S
   -use commas

Once upon a time there was a cat named ginger a  yummy sausage and a sweet bird.They loved to play in gardens .


Then came  a fine sunny day for the poor  hungry cat ginger  .
Ginger meowed I can cope without food . one day a delicious  sausage fall from the sky.


The  cat  and the lonely bird we're in bird bath  getting ready to catch that delicious sausage  suddenly the lonely bird ate the delicious grilled sausage ginger is still very grumpy.


Ginger is still very grumpy. 1 hour later gobble , gobble  ginger ate the poor lonely bird . the bird got deliciously  gobbled all up

4 comments:

  1. met L.G
    punctuation
    comma?

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  2. Postive:problem
    Postive:Setting
    Punctuation
    From Amy

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  3. Positive, You added a setting
    Positive, you had a problem
    N.S. Punctuation

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  4. you have a great setting
    you had a good solution
    N.S punctuation

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