Sunday, March 26, 2017

20-3-17

Addison Whitikia
Room 6
Year 5
Stratford Primary School
Regan Street,
Stratford

Moana Hancock
RD 21
Stratford

Dear Moana Hancock
Thanks for helping us out on camp, we really appreciate it.

Thank you for helping us on the swing bridge.  It was so nice of you to go out of your way to help us.

You were so nice to come to camp and do our walks, and watch our cool camp consist with your warm Winnie the pooh blanket.

You are so nice. Thank you.




From Addison Whitikia  

4 comments:

  1. addison well done

    nice spelling

    descripetive writing

    longer writing and more personal

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  2. 1.nice outro
    2.nice punctuation
    N.S descriptive
    otherwise awesome!

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  3. nice spelling

    lots of thought

    N.S descriptive

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  4. Awesome intro
    great paragraphs
    description
    Cool Writing

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