20-3-17
Addison Whitikia
Room 6
Year 5
Stratford Primary School
Regan Street,
Stratford
Moana Hancock
RD 21
Stratford
Dear Moana Hancock
Thanks for helping us out on camp, we really appreciate it.
Thank you for helping us on the swing bridge. It was so nice of you to go out of your way to help us.
You were so nice to come to camp and do our walks, and watch our cool camp consist with your warm Winnie the pooh blanket.
You are so nice. Thank you.
From Addison Whitikia
addison well done
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otherwise awesome!
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