Thursday, March 23, 2017

20.3.17
Ella makara
Stratford primary school
Regan street
Stratford

Dear Jackie vickers

I really appreciated how you gave up your time to be with us on camp.

You helped us cook .Without you we would be having toast for dinner.

We really liked how you walked with us to the Waingongoro hut .It was tough but your support made it easier.

I hope you had fun tramping with us and handing out fruit bursts to us.

Thank you for everything you have done for us.

Yours sincerely

Ella makara

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