L.G use paragraphs to organise my ideas

S.O.S use audience name in each paragraph.

Introduce each argument in each paragraph

Use at least 5 persuasive words

            More sport at sps!

I'm so bored.I wish we had more sport at sps.Mr Moore i'm going to give you 3 absolutely stunning reasons why we should have way more sport at sps.

firstly,Mr Moore.we need more sports so people can go out of there comfort zone and try new sports.Its good so when they dont want to keep playing the same sport they can do something different.You guys want people trying new things.

secondly,Mr Moore,I know you like participating in sport and other things.I know you want our school to be the best.Well bring in more sports because kids have heaps of energy to let out.I know kids like me want to get out and burn off energy and you want kids happy at school not unhappy.

lastly,Mr Moore, kids want to get better at sport.When kids get better at sport they feel better in themselves.It shows that 90.9% want to get better at sport and that is fantastic.

Mr Moore,’’ people say who cares about sport’’but actually it is good for your brain because it's a life cycle move,eat and be in a good mood for your brain to recharge and learn.

In my opinion we should have way more sport at sps.I know you care about sport.Make it happen Mr Moore!