Sunday, March 26, 2017

20 march  2017



Lukah phillips
Stratford primary school
Regan street
Stratford

Dear mum


Thank you for giving up all your time to come to our camp .
Thank you for preparing all the the food, it was just like home .
I remember when all the parents  went to hide and I found you and you ran away and fell in a rabbit hole .
Thank you for coming on all the walks to all the interesting  places we appreciated how you supervised us at Dawson falls  . Thanks for everything.
Your sincerely



Lukah phillips
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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 28, 2017 at 2:30 PM

    Postive:nice lay out
    postive:parghs
    Next step:full stops don't need a space before them

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  2. AnonymousMarch 28, 2017 at 2:36 PM

    nice detail
    nice layout
    next step try and remember no space before a full stop

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  3. AnonymousMarch 28, 2017 at 2:42 PM

    well done Lukah

    nice detail

    layout is nice

    No space before full stops.

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  4. AnonymousMarch 29, 2017 at 2:33 PM

    bullseye good detail
    bullseye punctuation
    nextstep no spaces between full stops

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  5. AnonymousApril 2, 2017 at 3:34 PM

    Good Job

    Amazing Detail

    Good Punctuation

    Work on your full stop placement typing

    ReplyDelete
  6. AnonymousMay 2, 2017 at 3:51 PM

    good detail
    good examples
    full stops

    ReplyDelete

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