Wednesday, September 20, 2017

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On Monday the 11th of september 2017,
The year five and six students from sps did masterchef at their school. There were three classes, each class had four groups of students. I went to the Italian meatballers restaurant from room six.
I walked up the ramp and into the school hall on monday morning. They asked me for my ticket so I showed them my ticket, then they showed me to the table. I chatted with some of the lovely people sitting next to me before we got our entree, which was garlic bread filled with yummy melted cheese in the middle. Then they asked me “what drink would you like coke, lemonade or raspberry,” said the lovely waitress with manners “ Raspberry please.” Next came the main, spaghetti and meatball it looked spectacular it was a bit boring though and it said topped with parmesan cheese but i’m certainly sure that i just got normal edam cheese. Then I had a peek through to have a look in the kitchen, everyone was working really hard preparing food, plating food, they were working hard. Then I got really excited  cause it was dessert time. When I had a look at the dessert  I almost fainted it looked so delicious and it was!! I t was definitely the best dish for me, Because it was neopolitan ice-cream drizzled with chocolate sauce and a flake sprinkled on top!!

So it was pretty good restaurant the service was friendly, fast and great service. The main was okay, and the dessert was delicious and the entree was to.

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