Monday, September 4, 2017


L.G.To use a variety of sentence lengths
S.O.S-put 1-2 words in a sentence

Boom! Crash! Bang! Wouldn't you just want all this drama  to stop.All these nuclear tests just to
Bomb America.That's Right people I Ella makara will be Telling North Korea and Kim Jong-un to stop trialing  missiles to reach america.


Firstly,There is no reason to bomb America.What has Mr Trump Enver done to you?You are going to hurt people and injure them really bad that they suffer a horrible,miserable death.


Secondly,all this drama and riot could send all of us into world war three (WW3).I am not a scientist but I've heard WW is not a great place to be. It is like being in a smokey jail.

Lastly,damage.Mr Kim Jong un,you and your fantasy friends need to get your act together and realize how much damage and people you are hurting.This world is to live in not to wreck.we need to look after our planet.

I have told you there is no reason to bomb America,it might start World War Three And think about all the damage you may cause.I Want you to think about this because you are not only hurting me you are hurting the world.

2 comments:

  1. Positive, Lots of facts
    Positive, Sentence Variety
    N.S. Check your spelling

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  2. i have no next steps really good ella

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