Monday, July 31, 2017

u  Dan Carter’s shot                                

S.o.s
S,a,p,s
Ryhme
Lines like a poem

In the Mighty stadium
Dan carter gets ready To shoot
He kicks the ball
Hopes for all
And prevents an all black downfall.

6 comments:

  1. positive / rhyming
    positive / rhyming
    next step / last picture is not Dan carter its Aaron cruden

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  2. positive / rhyming
    positive / rhyming
    next step / last picture is not Dan carter its Aaron cruden

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  3. rhyming
    good
    to much pictures

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  4. rhyming
    rhyming
    to many pics

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  5. rhyming
    long
    to many pics

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  6. rhyming
    lines like poem
    to many pics and to big font

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