Three little pigs
L.G:Use a variety of precise verbs
S.O.S:- Wow words
-Use similes and metaphors in my story
Once upon a time in a planet far far away, there lived three little, pink, fat Pigs and a sweet innocent Wolf. The three little Pigs had built their houses out of straw, bricks and sticks. They live in a village in a forest.
The Wolf wanted a cup of sugar for his grannies Birthday Cake, he also had a cold. So, he walked down to his neighbours, it was the 1st pink, fat Little pig like a real fat pig, and he yelled “Go away Wolf.” Then the Wolf felt a sneeze coming, so he snuffed and opened his mouth… AHHHH chooooo!!!!!!! The straw house came right down. Then the Wolf said “I haven’t had any dinner,”So the Wolf ate the fat pink pig!
So the Wolf still hadn’t got his sugar for his grannie’s birthday cake. So he went to the next house. He knocked on the door and ,it was the 2nd pink, pig, and he quietly whispered “Go away you BAD BAD Wolf.”But then...AHHH chooooo the sticks came flying and the pig was… DEAD.
But the wolf still needed the sugar for his grannie’s cake. So he went to the next house, like the other version of this story.And it was the 3rd fat, pink pig. But oh no the Wolf felt another sneeze coming he tried to hold it in but AHHH chooo. But guess what? The massive brick house didn’t come down.But the Wolf still didn’t get his one cup of sugar for his grannie’s birthday cake!!!
But the massive brick house didn’t come down.But the Wolf still didn’t get his one cup of sugar for his grannie’s birthday cake!!!
Good Story
ReplyDeletePositive, You used some "WOW" words
Positive, You used Great adjectives and verbs
N.S, Did not use many similes or metaphors.
P.S It says, but the massive brick house did not fall down. But the wolf still didn't get his one cup of sugar for his grannies birthday cake, Twice