Thursday, October 19, 2017

winston peters

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Dear mr peters

I am writing to you to recommend that you choose a coalition with national.
Suport nz families
Mr peters,national is helping nz families  get ahead
With more jobs and better public services for all new zealanders.
An extra $120m to christchurch arena

National are putting an extra $120 million towards the construction of  a new arena in christchurch.taking the government's total to $179 million.
Increase support of first house buyers
National are making it easier  for first house buyers to find a house for a cheaper price.

I hope that convinced you to choose a coalition with national.

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