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Dear Winston Peters:
I think you should choose Labour.I have 3 point to show you why.
Clean river
First,they 'll clean the rivers.You know,rivers is very important in New zealand.And Labour will clean the rivers.They 'll restore our rivers and lakes to a truly swimmable place.Clean rivers is good for everyone cause everyone owns the water.
Jobs
Second,if you choose Labour,New Zealanders can find jobs easier.Cause Labour 'll help young entrepreneurs to start their business or help others find other jobs.And they 'll make multinationals pay their fair share.
For older New Zealanders
Finally,Labour 'll support for older New Zealanders.If you choose labour,the super 'll stay at 65,they 'll give $8b more money for older New Zealanders to keep their health and 1000 more police for older New Zealanders.
Here is the 3 point for you,I hope you can choose Labour!